"The unmistakable sound of hooves on the stone floor". "Steam rose from its muzzle in the cold air." "the daemon hissed." "The daemon laughed, a dull rumble " This is just such excellent writing, Tom, spare, evocative, deep. You use onnly the words that are needed, no extraneous detail. So refreshing.
Thanks Sharron! I wrote this as an exercise in brevity, I wanted to see how much world I could build in... whatever it is. 250 words? I am pleased with it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it too.
"The unmistakable sound of hooves on the stone floor". "Steam rose from its muzzle in the cold air." "the daemon hissed." "The daemon laughed, a dull rumble " This is just such excellent writing, Tom, spare, evocative, deep. You use onnly the words that are needed, no extraneous detail. So refreshing.
Thanks Sharron! I wrote this as an exercise in brevity, I wanted to see how much world I could build in... whatever it is. 250 words? I am pleased with it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it too.